Sunday, February 22, 2009

Poem: Thank You, Thank You

A day late, but here's another poem from the book:

Thank You, Thank You

I leave your house with a shoebox of rejection slips
editors enclosed in my selfaddressed envelopes.
Good stationery. Polite form letters. Different types
of no to poems posted with thirtynine cent hopes.

A few took the trouble to scribble their subjectivities.
(These poems don’t meet our present needs.) Four
softened the blow by mildly singling out for praise
the flirt, the grovel, the hurt valve, or the hardcore.

There's one, burgundy halflettersized, kept
face up, raised by the others sleeping face down.
This one, generous in its plural pronoun, abrupt
in its brevity, added an afterthought, Try us again.

Submission seasons come and go. Every Sept
ember burns in a shoebox, because of this one.


fleuve-souterrain said...

Nice one! i was just telling Joy Leftow the other day let's write a "rejection slips" poem!

Jee Leong Koh said...

I'm glad you like a rejection. :-)